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Now im not sure if you're accepting contructive criticism... but here goes anyway.
When doing rain, especially in tropical environments, the presence of fog and mist is always prevalent. Having small clouds of the such (in white) rising from the ground would help. Alost, there does seem to be a bit too many rain drops. Not that it wouldnt be a heavy rain, just that in this picture, i thought it was one of those etched effects done to give the picture a mood.
There should be splashes of rain on the armored truck.
My biggest problem with this picture is often one I have with military subjects, in that the camouflage makes the subject blend in with its background, which is what it's supposed to do, of course, but it doesn't make for a very interesting composition.