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©2008-2009 ~Bristow-Bailey
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Not happy with the pilot. Something wrong with the pose or anatomy. Can't work out what. Please help. Thanks!

Update: New file uploaded! I've got to thank Nelson808 :iconnelson808: for help on this one - he didn't do anything to fix the anatomy issues, but cunningly suggested a rather more dramatic lighting scheme that hides the flaws and makes the composition as a whole rather more successful. The man is a pro, and a gentleman.

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:iconkrissx2:
Ohh this looks amazing .. i love your style ...

About his pose ... im a noob in anatomy but i think that his right foot should be turned bit to the right :P
:iconnelson808:
Hey BB....very nice...a lot of work here, I will send you a note about your question later...!
I have a couple suggestions for you ...if you don't mind?!

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:iconbristow-bailey:
Thanks - yes, you might be right about the foot. I think there's something wrong with the torso, though. Something to do with the perspective, or something.

I can't really tell because I've been looking at this picture all day. I'm sure it will become painfully apparent to me in a week or so.

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I didn't see the old version, but I very much like this one.

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:iconbristow-bailey:
Thanks! the old one was much lighter and more evenly-lit, and showed all the mistakes :)

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March 23, 2008
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